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Scrivenshaft Challenge Cycle III – September 2005 : "September First: A Journey"

Cycle Dates: 21 August 2005 - 1 October 2005
Entries Submitted: 11
Winners Announced: 31 October 2005

The Prompt

The Premise:
Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince ended with an uncertainty about the future of Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry. Would it reopen in the Fall? If it did, who would return, and why? For those who do not return, what will they do instead? What adventures lay ahead for Harry, Ron, and Hermione? The Order? The Wizarding World? Voldemort?

The Challenge:
It's September 1st, and someone is traveling.
Who is traveling? Have they just begun or are they nearing the end of their voyage? Where are they going? What happens along the way? That's up to you.

Your Limits

1. Your story must begin and end on September 1st of what would be Harry's 7th year.
2. The entry must include mention of a train.
3. All characters, events, and situations must be in line with HBP-canon; no OCs, no living Dumbledore, no Time-Turners. (Sorry MWPP people, but we'd like to branch out a bit. Reminiscence by present-day characters is fine, but Lily, James, Sirius, etc., are all dead and so cannot be used as living characters.) If you have any concerns about using proper information, please use resources such as the Harry Potter Lexicon, which has been updated for HBP.

Entry Rules/Regulations

1. Entries should be no longer than 3,000 words [any entries above 4,000 words will be disqualified].
2. An extra winning category of "Best Drabble" will be included for entries of less than 500 words.
3. You are allowed to submit as many entries as you like.
4. Please proofread your entry. Ensure that all punctuation, spelling, and grammar are correct before submitting your entry (you may also wish to send a copy of your entry to yourself to ensure that we received a version that is readable).

The Award-Winners

Award-winning categories are explained on the main Scrivenshaft page.

Raising The Bar: "Shades of Mercy" by twinsuns


Why we loved it: "The flow of the narrative, the choice of words, everything flows so nicely and wonderfully that it captivates the reader. The diction is carefuly crafted to leave a dark overtone to the story, which goes wonderfully with the overall meaning and the quote within. With the use of almost no dialogue, the prose manages to create a powerful emotion that emanates from the piece. It is wistful, regretful, and very appropriate. I see no real faults in this piece; it only leaves the reader wondering, about what must have lead up to that point, what's to come, and what exactly the meaning and warning behind it is." -thirty2flavors

Cheering Charm: "Stranger With Orange Hair" by Aseret


Why we loved it: "Characterization is beautiful, plot and setting take a back seat as quirky and rather realistic dialogue comes into play." - imari " An original, quirky piece of work which roots out the humour in the most hopeless of situations." - Quixoticity

Rising Star: "A Promise Made Is A Promise Kept" by falling_star13


Why we loved it: "I think this story gave a great real and believable image of Ginny as a character and person. It was very in character, and expressed the poignant points about Harry and Ginny's relationship and the world around them. The writing was nice and flowed well. I was interested from beginning to end. The slightly cynical yet hopeful turn of the story was a good mix." - BeeDaily

Brilliance of Brevity: "A Lot of Time to Kill" by Alya1989262


Why we loved it: "I liked the sarcastic tone of voice dominating the beginning of this entry. The atmosphere seemed pessimistic and yet amusingly so. It was subtly written at times and the fact we don’t know the identity of the narrator till the end was intriguing." - clyana "Worth every second it takes you to read it, and I would encourage anyone who is looking for something a little different to plunge in." - penguininpink

Eureka!: "A Sprig of Silver" by shootingstar


Why we loved it: "This has got to be one of the best in the competition, simply because it doesn't have woe-is-me. Woe-is-me-let-me-brood is so last year." - sunsgoldenray "A Sprig of Silver is a refreshing break in the clouds, a nice ray of sunshine, and the accurate, heart-warming portrayal of Luna makes it so." - thirty2flavors

The Challenge Entries

"It Started There" by LadyElla64
"Love-Hate Relationship" by Ifylla
"Shades of Mercy" by twinsuns
"A Sprig of Silver" by shootingstar
"A Lot of Time To Kill" by Alya1989262
"Tête-à-tête by Nymph_Patronus
"Hope Comes on Dark Wings" by Anya
"Stranger With Orange Hair" by Aseret
"The Grave Visitor" by VictoriaM2006
"Hairy Snouts, Human Hearts" by elladorajobberknoll
"A Promise Made is a Promise Kept" by falling_star13

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