Reviews on "Listen To Your Heart" by HiJane_2
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #10.
(May 28th 2008, 3pm)awwwwwe i liked this one. it's cute how tongue-tied they make eachother!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #9.
(May 8th 2008, 4am)Wow that was good u should post the rest of the story!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #9.
(April 3rd 2008, 7pm)oh la-la! so will lilykins get the nerve to talk to james next chapter?! can't wait to find out!
_vodkaholic
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #8.
(March 29th 2008, 5am)I didn't expect it to be so easy, but not too bad. I'll have to check out that one shot!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #6.
(March 28th 2008, 9pm)er you may want to edit this chapter, it's all distorted toward the end and looks like it's copied a second time. but very well!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #5.
(March 28th 2008, 9pm)I think you're a little late to finish this before the last book comes out! lol I liked this one, too. The long paragrpahs between James and Lily made it easier to actually picture them.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #4.
(March 28th 2008, 9pm)i really liked this chapter, everything just sort of flowed well!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #3.
(March 28th 2008, 9pm)you did sort of jump around, but you didn't do it poorly so i was still a good read!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #2.
(March 28th 2008, 8pm)tch, boys really are a spot confusing! (i know i read the last chapter, i'm just re-reading!)
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #1.
(March 28th 2008, 8pm)awe have i mentioned that i adore this?
Written by Anonymous on chapter #7.
(March 28th 2008, 12pm)I think that Lily thinks that Remus is a werewolf, because of the symptoms! And YES, she's right!! =] Keep writing more !!
lily_evans
Written by Anonymous on chapter #7.
(March 27th 2008, 11pm)awe poor Jamiekins! Lily's temper sure does manage to get the best of her sometimes.. I would assume she's thinking werewolf, yeah? Or that she may think his mum is a werewolf.. Huh. Anyhow, can't wait for the next!
_vodkaholic
Written by kristen514 on chapter #6.
(February 9th 2008, 6pm)I love your plot, most people who write a J/L fic just have them fighting the entire time... which is exhausting to read. So your fic is really refreshing!!! However when you are writing the dialouge it sound just a little to contrived. I doesn't really sound like people talking!! I don't want to sound rude or critical but maybe if the characters conversations relaxed it would sound better!! Thanks!! I look foward to reading the next chapter
Written by Cubicle on chapter #1.
(May 7th 2006, 10am)I loved this! I love the song, the characters--everything. Keep up the good work!
It's just that you might want to get a beta. Yeah, that.
Ami
PS-Review my fic? Pleeeaaase?
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