Reviews on "A Day Worth Remembering" by TelwynDubois

Written by ixnay on chapter #1.

(February 7th 2006, 11pm)

Oh, angst. Oh, Valentine's day. The two go very nicely together.

I think you do a great job with the dialogue, and you really capture something quintessential about teenage girls with all of their various complaints and personalities. Really...the discussion was natural and realistic.

I sort of wish that the girls had just happened to gather and talk, as opposed to making a conscious tradition of it. It makes things a tad forced.

Hmm...I think you pulled off the angst VDAY thing well, well, well. Very well. And your writing is pretty.

Author Response:

Yes, they do, don't they? Happy Singles' Awareness Day!:) That is one of the niest things anyone has ever said about my dialogue. *hugs* I shall think about perhaps tweaking it a little to be a random gathering of upset girls, when I have time. :)Thanks for reviewing!Telly

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