Reviews on "The Beautiful Game" by 
koonelli
Written by blue_jeans on chapter #17.
(January 14th 2008, 1am)i really love tis story!! great job!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #17.
(December 13th 2007, 2am)awwwe this is by far my favorite story! i only wish it were longer!
Written by girl101 on chapter #17.
(August 25th 2007, 11pm)I just finished reading this fanfic and feel so happy. I liked how simple this was but how emotional it made me feel. You really had me rooting for James and Lily to get together.
Written by Grace on chapter #17.
(August 23rd 2007, 4pm)Amazing! This story is simply amazing. I love how much Quiddich was incorporated in the story. I especially liked how clean the content was.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #17.
(July 18th 2007, 6pm)aw. i loved it. the feel of it was just so right, you know?
leaves you with a smile on your face. great fic.Written by Anonymous on chapter #15.
(July 17th 2007, 9pm)nooooo!!!!!
I WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER WHY DO I HAVE TO SIT HERE AND CRY MYSELF TO SLEEP BECAUSE JAMES HASN'T KISSED HER YET?
..i'm dying here
Written by Anonymous on chapter #8.
(July 17th 2007, 2am)oh this was adorable i really liked this chapter. about halfway through i had a mistake in mind i meant to bring to your attention.. and now i completely forget because i am too busy laughing my head off at those last two lines.
OH! yeah i just wanted to say isnt it a tad unreasonable that five hours went by without her noticing. one is fine, two is pushing it..but FIVE? bit of a stretch.
otherwise love love LOVED this chapter.
Written by anna126 on chapter #17.
(January 12th 2007, 1am)You are an amazing author.
This is a fantastic story.
I have that happy feeling right now, you know, the one you get after you complete a really good story with a perfect ending.
I don't know the proper words to express how I feel about this story, so I guess I'll have to settle for positively-fantabulously-best-cute-fluffy-yet-
not-exceedingly-perfect-piece-of-work.
That doesn't even make sense. Hahah
Written by the_adjective on chapter #17.
(September 26th 2006, 4am)Ahh... fantastic. Just as I remember. I would just like to inform you that the greatness of this fic has kept me from doing any of my homework and practicing my instrument. To that I can only say this:
Bloody great story, mate! :)
Written by the_adjective on chapter #10.
(September 26th 2006, 2am)Just a side note... At the start of the game in this chapter you introduce the opposing team as Ravenclaw, but in the commentary they switch to Hufflepuff.
Onward! :)
Written by the_adjective on chapter #2.
(September 25th 2006, 11pm)The end of this chapter makes me laugh cause I can just see what happens directly after this: James gets a huge, rediculous grin on his face, shouts for joy, and starts jumping around in celebration. =P
I've read this before and I liked it so much I'm reading it again. It's good to be back. =D
Written by Anonymous on chapter #17.
(September 10th 2006, 3am)OMG that was SUCH a greeat ending! Awww I'm gonna miss this story...one of the best L/J fics I've read in a very long time. Fantastic work!
Written by takefourmoments on chapter #17.
(June 28th 2006, 4am)Aw, this was so cute. :D I loved your comparisons, all the way through the story. They always had me laughing. And I love Lilo. hah. Fabulous job.
Written by Kodakphoto on chapter #17.
(June 18th 2006, 9pm)This is a wonderful story! I actually read it first on ff.net, so I've just re-read it.
First off, I love your writing style.
I also just love everything about this plot! James' nickname for Lily (Lilo), and the excitement that the quidditch games give me. Especially Lily jumping off. Great job!!
Written by SapphireSilhouette on chapter #17.
(April 24th 2006, 6am)I love you and this absolutely brilliant piece of fanfiction that you have written.
That's all there is to it.
Written by Cubicle on chapter #17.
(February 19th 2006, 12pm)Awwwwww. KAIWAII!!! I loved it! Cute, fluffy, and amazing!
`Ami`Written by Anonymous on chapter #17.
(February 5th 2006, 9pm)Just finished reading the whole in a matter of a few days. I think I'm in love with this. So nicely written, witty, and RIGHT. Guh. One of the best characterizations of Lily and James I've ever read. Spectacular job with this.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 27th 2005, 6pm)//“Bloody Hell,” he muttered quietly, shifting his position, she he could get a better ear-press, “What a nasty bastard!”
“Oh, don’t pretend you’re not happy about this, James,” Verity said dismissively. James grinned.
“It was worth a try.” ////“Shame on you! That’s not making me feel any better.”
“Sorry,” apologised Verity, fiddling with the quilt.
"Actually, yes it is,” grinned Lily, “Say it again, please.” //Small moments like that again, I like. There are more, but too lazy to look for them.
That last part of Rita was suitable. I honestly thought she was OC the first time she was introduced. (But then, I'm not that much of an HP fanatic to know every sorry detail about her.)
And one last thing, that part of Lily saying she hated Amos all along seemed out of place. He was her boyfriend, afterall. Unless of course, she's saying that to let out her anger but she seemed genuine about it so....
And I forgot to mention, but I liked Ch3's title.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(December 27th 2005, 6pm)>>she trailed off, unable to think of another reason, “And I hate you,” -good enough,
I like small lines like that.I don't know why, but I also enjoyed James' giddy moment when Lily told him she enjoyed flying. :D
-KYOY
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(December 27th 2005, 5pm)[i]"Your relationship is a lot like Quidditch." The boys stared at her in confusion.
"What? James keeps losing?" asked Peter.
"Shut up, Wormtail, I'm listening to this," James said.[/i]LMAO. That made me laugh. This fic was recommended to me by a friend. So far, so good. :D *reads on*
-KYOY
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(December 12th 2005, 5am)
PotterChick958 on chapter #17.GAH! I bloody LOVED this story! Amazing, from beginning to end. I loved how Lily became this little Quidditch star. I loved your Quidditch games. They were so exciting and exhilirating! I felt like I really was Lily, dashing to catch the snitch. I loved how James was so in love with Lily, but afraid to ruin what he had with her. I loved every moment of this story, and wish you the BEST of luck in the Hourglass Awards. You truly deserve the nomination. GOOD LUCK!
Love, Amanda
Author Response:
What? Hourglass Awards? Did I get a nomination? OH, my gosh! So I did. Thank so much for telling me! I don't think I would have realised otherwise! Gosh, I'm so out of it. Thanks!
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(December 12th 2005, 5am)PotterChick958 on chapter #16.OH MY EFFING GOSH SHE DID IT! *MAJOR SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!* I am just so HAPPY and EXCITED right now!
Bloody hell those Slytherins are annoying! But in spite of it all, Lily won! Oh, I am just so proud of her!
You wrote the game so well. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time in suspense. Good job!
Love, Amanda
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(December 12th 2005, 4am)PotterChick958 on chapter #14.GAH YAY! I FREAKING LOVE LILY! *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!* Oh, I am just so HAPPY and excited right now! She finally realized how loveable James is! AND THEY WILL HAVE LITTLE HARRY OH SO SOON! Gah.
I am just so excited for the 2 of them right now...you don't even know.
Well, you proally do, cuz you wrote them like this! YAY!
Love, Amanda
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(December 11th 2005, 11pm)PotterChick958 on chapter #3.Thank goodness. Stupid Amos, just TRYING to find something astray with James...he needs to learn to trust his girlfriend. Well, ex-girlfriend. I didn't like Amos at all. Its too bad, cuz Cedric was such a nice guy!
Lily is a natural at flying. Your description was very good. I felt like I was flying with Lily myself. And it makes me want to be able to fly even more. Gah.
Love, Amanda
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(December 11th 2005, 5pm)PotterChick958 on chapter #1.Oh, I love this first chapter! Who would have thought that Lily has such amazing reflexes? But I hope she gives in to James and will play for the House team! She does seem to have quite a bit of skill...
Great beginning! I can't wait to read the rest!
Love, Amanda
Written by genuinescence on chapter #17.
(November 26th 2005, 11pm)I LOVE THIS FIC!
Awsome plot, such a fun read! I really love your style of writing and all I can say is, KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK!
Written by smartcookie on chapter #1.
(November 6th 2005, 1am)Oh my goodness! I haven't seen this in ages (obviously) but it's so nice to read (again)! Actually... I don't think 'nice' quite sums it up. I love this story!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(November 3rd 2005, 4am)I think I already read this story but I'm not sure...maybe I'll just read it again!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #17.
(October 28th 2005, 9pm)Ooh...simply a lovely, sweet, fluffy story all around. If I have to give constructive critiscm, Peter didn't really exist. It didn't ruin the story for me or anything. I admire you for stopping here, and not going through the whole Lily and James break up and get back together thing, not that I would have minded more.
Author Response:
I know, I sort of forgot about him, and I'm heartily ashamed of myself for it. Thing is, it's not because I have a grudge against him for betraying Lily and James and think he should be punished in the fandom world, he just seems to be a bit of a useless character that couldn't contribute anything good to the fic. But you;re right, I should have shoved him in there somewhere.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #17.
(October 23rd 2005, 5am)I just wanted to let you know, that you are my hero. That was quite possibly one of my favorite stories of all time, and you didn't even make it sleazy and "making-love" filled like most authors do.
It was so well written. And this isn't the only story of yours that I've fallen in love with. Love it love it love it. Hoping to read all of your stories in the future--
SB
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