Reviews on "Immature" by walkingcensure
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(January 23rd 2010, 9pm)Aww, that was so cute ^^ and funny :D
Written by FadingSlowly on chapter #5.
(December 21st 2009, 6am)i loved this so much that i decided to get an account here just so i could review it! it was the cutest thing! fantastic!
Written by HogwartsHussy on chapter #5.
(July 17th 2009, 9pm)This is funny as long as I forget that you said they are seven years old. And the best part is that since we now know that Lily knew Severus before Hogwarts, this is even funnier if you imagine Lily and Severus planning to marry at twelve!
Written by HogwartsHussy on chapter #3.
(July 17th 2009, 8pm)They come across more like 3 - 5 year old here than 7 honestly.
Written by HogwartsHussy on chapter #2.
(July 17th 2009, 8pm)Poor Goldie!
Written by HogwartsHussy on chapter #1.
(July 17th 2009, 8pm)I found this via the list of Hourglass Award nominees. Congratulations!
I moved to a new neighborhood at seven and my friends and I probably behaved similarly. I had a new puppy. My mother tied him to the porch railing and told me that my job was to watch him so he wouldn't get hurt. Of course all of the kids on the block were watching the moving van and wondering if any kids were moving in. So in short order, they came over to admire the "nice puppy" and struck up conversations!
Written by oneslikeme on chapter #5.
(June 11th 2009, 4pm)aw, this was a really adorable story! i love you way you told it. :)
Written by MarauderNumber5 on chapter #1.
(May 3rd 2009, 7pm)this was adorable! :)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(March 2nd 2009, 11am)hi,
the whole story is very cute... i hope u come up with more stories like that... maybe a draco and hermione story...
Written by lilyflower09 on chapter #5.
(February 26th 2009, 4am)Aww. Cute! :D
Loved it. :)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #2.
(January 9th 2009, 5pm)oh god this is the cutest thing ever! O_O
Written by Anonymous on chapter #2.
(January 9th 2009, 5pm)oh god this is the cutest thing ever! O_O
Written by bluecardboardbox on chapter #5.
(September 26th 2008, 11am)'Tis very cute.
I love it.Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(April 7th 2007, 9pm)Hahahah this is the cutest story ever. Seriously. hahahahah awwww
Written by the_adjective on chapter #5.
(June 20th 2006, 9pm)this is so cute. I loved every bit of it. and I couldn't stop laughing during that whole pregnancy bit. Great job. :)
Written by stellar002 on chapter #1.
(May 28th 2006, 2am)haha Oh, this is so gorgeous. It's really hard to characterise little kids, but this is great. They don't seem too young or too old or anything, it's great.
"If she hadn’t called, Remus would have hit Sirius with a big-word scolding, and Sirius’ ego would’ve been wounded for the best part of the day."
haha This made me laugh. It's so gorgeous. hehehe Lily sounds exactly like a kid I babysat last night. haha This is going into my favourites list right NOW. haha
Soph
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Written by TwinklingStars on chapter #5.
(February 16th 2006, 4am)Aww, that was very cute. I love the whole pregnant idea, and I love how they were all grossed out by Sirius's naked kisses in bed theory. Little kids are so funny, their fixation with twelve was most amusing as well. Great story, very cute.
Written by Queen_of_Catastrophe on chapter #1.
(January 9th 2006, 2am)Awww. I'm sitting here grinning like mad right now. I can completely picture all of them, and they are adorable and I loved it. You portrayed the little Marauders and Lily so well! So utterly and completely cute. That was perfect and lovely, you're amazing and so getting added to my favorites.
Author Response: :D Thank you x1000000. I'm not sure if this is a review for the whole thing or just the 1st chapter. I'm just saying in case you didn't realize there are 5 chapters and thought this was a one-shot (because I am afraid of commitment and have written very few multi-chapter fics). I wouldn't want you to miss chapter 4. It's my favorite. ^^,
Written by Tate_Dean on chapter #5.
(January 8th 2006, 9pm)awwww this was SOOOO cute!! aww i can't get over how cute they all were! that pregnancy thing was HILARIOUS, i was laughing soo hard when sirius first told james...this was soo cute, i really loved it. it was beautifully written too...good job!
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(December 21st 2005, 7am)
infinitesimal on chapter #5.Wow.
You have yet to write a single story that hasn't made me smile. (Ew, double-negative.)
Annnnyways, congrats on being AMAZING.
Written by ronislove on chapter #5.
(December 14th 2005, 4am)Heeheehee, that is just plain adorable to the maximum. Ack! I want you to write a sequel! Now! Now! Now!
I am really starting to sound like I'm as old as James and them, hm?
I adored the story though. "D
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(December 13th 2005, 5am)I LOVE THIS FiC TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!! That was amazing and it made me all happy and mushy inside! Yay yay yay and it would be awesome if you wanted to have a story of L and J at school after this! = ) but it was truly amazing, thank you!
Written by wrenifer on chapter #5.
(December 11th 2005, 5pm)This was the cutest little story ever. I loved it, what a cute little ending as well. Thanks for wrapping it up. The whole story makes me smile
Written by mische on chapter #5.
(December 11th 2005, 4pm)Ohmygosh the sweetnessssss. I love. Makes me want to take this fic and hug it!! I love how you said Lily kisses James on the cheek "for a along time." So terrifically sweet.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 11th 2005, 5am)I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! I'm awaiting another update, this story is hillarious! It would be great to track them all the way to Hogwarts, see how they grow up together . . . . . just a thought!
Written by Lady_Alasse on chapter #4.
(December 10th 2005, 2am)Oh this is so cute! I love how they're all portrayed as being childish but not too silly. Little!Sirius and Little!Remus have to be my favorites. James and Lily are so cute here, with their first kiss, etc. XD Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 10th 2005, 1am)i love ur story! its sho cute! love James, love Sirius, love Remus!
Written by wrenifer on chapter #4.
(December 8th 2005, 2pm)Ok this is the cutest little story ever! I really like it. Little James is so cute. This whole story is like Muppet Babies to me. I also really loved the Sirius and Regulus interaction.
Written by ronislove on chapter #3.
(December 7th 2005, 6am)I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier (I've read this since the first chapter, yayyy), and I think this story is absolutely cute. I'm now officially going to start moping about, weeping about how the author of this fic left me hanging on WHATTHEHEYISBLACKDOINGHMMMMMM?
Keep up the good work!
Written by mische on chapter #3.
(December 7th 2005, 4am)XD Childhood giddiness is just bursting from these chapters. They are so adorable. I loved the part about marriage being a "big leap" and James having a high jump. Very cute! Are you sure a boy like James knows the word "livid" though? [Maybe he's brilliant and picked it up from his parents, don't know. Just a nitpicky observation.]
Anyways, much love for the story!!
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