Reviews on "Like a Romantic Comedy" by 
cosmopolitan
Written by Anonymous on chapter #6.
(July 29th 2008, 11pm)i also agree with vodkaholic below. prelude to destiny is reeeeally good
Written by Anonymous on chapter #6.
(July 29th 2008, 11pm)beautiful contradictions by drowning goldfish is one of my favorites, but its on fanfiction.net
deconstruct, a memoir
amaranthine
that summer
my deliverance
those are my favoritesss and theyre all LJ's. enjoyy :]
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #10.
(July 25th 2008, 9pm)She's crazy. Hhaha, update soon!
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #9.
(July 22nd 2008, 1am)LOL, as hilarious as always! I particularly loved Lily's descriptions of their battles of wits! I dunno if I've said this before, but you are a comedic genius!
Author Response:
aw, as akways you manage to make me blush, you really are much to kind in your reviews love
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #9.
(July 19th 2008, 9pm)lol James and Lily are hilarious. update soon!
I'm excited for Booth and Bones, too [;
Author Response:
lol, thanks!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #8.
(July 19th 2008, 9pm)ack no! she can't think that!
Author Response:
ah, but she does...
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #7.
(July 19th 2008, 8pm)some of the best LJ stories: New Perspectives by CRYSTALKISSES, Deconstruct, A Memoir by Solarism, My Deliverance by TwinSuns, Haggis from Algernon by Vea, Prelude to Destiny by AnotherDreamer, Amaranthine by Playground_Love, You Can't Hurry Love and Silences Between Leaves by Sarinileni, Pensieve by Oy_Angelina, Exception to the Rule by LovesDelight, The Not-so-Secret and Completly Manly Diary of James Potter by NewYorkCityCop and Commentarius by Beedaily. Some other good ones are a Keen Observer by DeepDownSlytherin and Tongue Tied by QueensPuppet, also the Cedric Diggory Papers, I forgot the author. there's some other good ones, but these were off the top of my head.
Author Response:
thank you for that list, i'll be sure to check those fics out!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #6.
(July 19th 2008, 8pm)LOL, I love the dialogue you use! I'm interested in seeing what will happen with this whole jealousy thing!
Author Response:
lol, ugh i'm soglad to hear that!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #9.
(July 17th 2008, 8pm)okay, so i never review stories, but ive been reading yours, and i really enjoy it...especially because you have that bones note at the end. :D anyways, the story's great so far!
Author Response:
lol, well very glad to hear that then
Written by justblaise on chapter #9.
(July 17th 2008, 6pm)This whole story needs work.
Author Response:
in some respects i suppose you do ahvea point, but i dont think it deserves quite that cutting of a remark
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #8.
(July 17th 2008, 12am)WOW!!! Not only is this fic utterly hilarious, it's getting dramatic and gossipy!! Could it be any better? I think not! Please update soon, I must have more randomness that only this fic provides satisfactorily.
Author Response:
lol, i'm so happy to see that you're still enjoyign it, thank you! [just updated btw, you reminded me that i ahd an amlmost finished chap waiting, so thank you!]
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #7.
(July 17th 2008, 12am)"caffeinated heavenliness"...so, so true.
Anyway, loved it as always, particularly Lily's musings on Barbies and shrugging. You truly have a gift, the way you write Lily's thoughts - it's some of the funniest stuff I've ever read! One thing though - remember that capitalization is your friend ;)Author Response:
eh, let it just be said that i hate microsoft word and my penchant for typos:D
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #6.
(July 17th 2008, 12am)Well, there were a few typos, but I don't think this chapter was total crap. However, since when is this an AU fic? Since when does James not notice LIly in that way. Oh, and if you want a nice Dramione fic, check out my fic "Just For This Moment" (my personal fave out of all my fics), and if you want a Harmony fanfic, you can check out my "Hogwarts Musical" (though that one is a tad silly, I just finished handwriting a sequel to it!)
Author Response:
once again, see response above ;) lolas for the AU, fromt he beginning, they're actually friends here for 1, and then there's the points you made...
Written by truebleu on chapter #7.
(July 9th 2008, 10pm)kind of short, but I still liked it. especially when she said “I know, I think it’s time for a change though, a break from the marauders, you know?” haha thats so good. update soon please!
Author Response:
eh, it was primarily to set the scene for the next chapter, reallyas for that line, glad you caught on to it ;)
Written by truebleu on chapter #6.
(July 5th 2008, 3am)Great chapter! Its a good leader into the rest of the plot.
Sorry about your depression delay!! Please cheer up!
Anddd some great fics on this site... I didn't check if you had any favs already so sorry if I repeat anything but here you go:
lust...or love by sarinileni
deconstruct, a memoir by solarism (not finished)
haggis from algernon by vea (finished and completely hilarious)
commentarius by beedaily (not finished)
they are all really good and all lj cause its the only thing I ever read. I hope you like them!Author Response:
thank you so much, and i will be sure to check out those fics as well!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #5.
(June 26th 2008, 6am)lol I love the way you wrote this, it flows with this version of Lily so well! Hilarious! Can't wait to read the next!
lol@the soccer bar scene.
Author Response:
lol, you have no idea how glad i am to hear that!
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #5.
(June 26th 2008, 2am)ROTFLMAO!!! I don't know if it's possible, but I think this fic gets funnier with eahc new chapter. I absolutely love how you make Lily and Siirus interact, it's such a hilarious battle of wit - they're both whack and both think they're so smart (as opposed to the Lily/Remus one, where Remus is basically playing Dr. Phil and is clearly much saner than Lily). This is like my new favorite fic, please keep updating!
P.S. I'm glad you like my icon! And I only assume it's PMS because that's the excuse my friends always use - and I often end up being right :PAuthor Response:
aw, thank you! and remus would make a rather good dr. phil, no? lol
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(June 26th 2008, 12am)hah. sirius. i seriously doubt his manliness now:] and he comes up with such great plans! he has a point though, with the whole cliche. another funny chapter, can't wait for the next one :] :]
Author Response:
oh i think he'll continue to disprove his manliness as time goes on!
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #4.
(June 25th 2008, 2am)LMAO, I love this fic! Particularly how aware Lily is of her shortcomings ("I like being the jealous bitch" - classic). And I never got why other guys are so uncomfortable with the whole period thing. I sure as hell aint - I openly ask my friends if they're PMSing when they act bitchier than usual (they oftne try to excuse their bitchiness with PMS, which I don't buy cuz I have friends who PMS and you'd never be able to tell by their behavior). ANyway, getting a bit offtopic...
But yeah, love this fic, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update!Author Response:
well, it is very befitting of your icon's message (nice, btw).as for the period thing, it's either like your situation where they immediately assume a girl has her period (v. annoyign thign for me as i never get mood swings from that, i just get pissed off when i''m angry--normal pissed off that we all have, not at all coorelated to my period) or yeah... it's the blanching at the mere mention of tampons... and dont worry, my reply went off ona tangent just now as wellthnak you so much for your super uplifting reviews
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(June 24th 2008, 10pm)I think the story is going good. But you have to make it a little more clear, because it does get a little confusing in some areas, but that is a minor detail. Please keep updating, the story is really good!!!!!!
Author Response:
aw thank you, i'm very glad to heart that you think so!as for the confusion, can you please tell me where so i cna fix that?
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(June 23rd 2008, 9pm)hah. "like that time that I hexed little James, and made him peanut little—for two weeks" sounds fun :] i can't wait to see what kind of plan lily and sirius will cook up!!:]
Author Response:
lol, they'll have issues settling on one, that much i can promise
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #4.
(June 23rd 2008, 8pm)hahaha I love this! Lily is hilarious! Their conversations are a hoot! Can't wait for more!
Author Response:
glad to hear it!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #3.
(June 23rd 2008, 8pm)Lily is hilarious! This is great! I love it [;
Author Response:
thank you!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(June 22nd 2008, 3am)hah. this part made me laugh: “I don’t like feelings; you know that I find them too messy. Wasn’t too fond of the fact that I might be growing them for him—scared me shitless, really.”
“I know,” he told me, exuding empathy as he placed a hand over mine, rubbing soft circles into it.
..... along with a lot of other parts. these conversations are so funny to read. it's fun :] i'm glad sirius stepped in. i'm sure he'll come up with some crazy plan. he's a lot of fun to read also :] :] can't wait for the next chapter!
Author Response:
aw thank you, it means so much to me to see that a fic that i was extremely hesitant about is actually being found enjoyable--esp. to such an extent!
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #3.
(June 18th 2008, 4am)LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! *stops gasping from laughter*
You really should not write such funny stuff without warning people. It's past midnight here, and I'm laughing like some demented hyena (good thing my mom's used to it, but still). What can I say, this was absoltue genius! Please do update soon, sicne I get the feeling this fic would do me wonders on a bad day.Author Response:
aw lol, :blush: i really didnt expect such high praise (not that it's not appreciated--just nopt expected, altho i do suppose that amkes it all the sweeter, no? lol)THANK YOU!
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #2.
(June 18th 2008, 4am)ROTFLMFAOWWFE!!!!!!!!!! I was in hysterics when I read the pie thing! This is comedic genius, with a nice mix of drama thrown in! The perfect fic!
Author Response:
the perfect fic? wow, i swear you're officailly one of my fav reviewers, the thxigns you do for my ego...
Written by hpboy13 on chapter #1.
(June 18th 2008, 3am)LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh wow, now this is what I call an entertaining read. Though I read a fair few of thyem, oen does get sick of the sickeningly sweet L/J fluffy fics, and its nice to see Lily with some personality! Wonderful job, and I'm off to read more!Author Response:
glad to hear it... v. glad
Written by Anonymous on chapter #2.
(June 13th 2008, 11pm)hah. i love these lily/remus quips. so remus wouldn't help her end it? it'd be great if she went to sirius next of all people. well, sirius being sirius, he'd probably help her...i can't wait to see where this goes next. :]
Author Response:
i'm so glad to hear that you're enjoyign that as there's surely going to be a lot more of itthank you
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #2.
(June 13th 2008, 10pm)hahaha, i love remus! this was so cute! excited for the next chapter!
Author Response:
aw thank you, you have no idea how much it heartens me to hear that!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(June 10th 2008, 7pm)I Like It!!!!!!! Actually it sis pretty good itis really different from left Side chats but I like it when Lily and James are happy together. That is how I always pictured them, the Perfect Couple.
Author Response:
aw thank you i\'m so glad to hear you\'re enjoying it despite the fact that it\'s such a departure from that fic!
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