Reviews on "Happy Birthday, Victoire" by abok1972

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #5. (November 19th 2008, 4am) Nice story! You're rooting for Victorie and Teddy all through! Author Response: Yes, I subtly root for them in every chapter! thanks for reviewing!

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #4. (November 8th 2008, 4pm)

• Written by enchantedsleeper on chapter #1. (August 15th 2008, 8pm) Great chapter! But you know, people don't eat pancakes for breakfast in England. Author Response: You know, I didn't know that. I guess it's blatantly obvious that I'm not British, now. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

• Written by xx_audrey on chapter #4. (July 30th 2008, 5pm) Awww this was so sweet! I love how you tied together everything around one date, it made Victoire and Teddy's growing up seamless and you could really see how their feelings changed. Author Response: Oooh! It\'s been awhile since anyone\'s been over to this fic! Actually, this one has lots of hits, just not as many reviews as GAC. I have a soft spot for it, as it was my first V/T fic! Glad you enjoyed it, Victoire here is a lot different than in GAC. I liked writing her birthdays too, and when you write about every other year, you can show lots of growth! You might check out \'Epilogue, or Three Months Later,\' which is a companion to HBV. Thanks for reviewing!

• Written by vodkaholic on chapter #4. (June 7th 2008, 6am) awe man! this was so sweet and cute and romantic! it was absolutely perfect! i love it! will there be more? Author Response: Thank you! A little fluffy, especially there at the end. I have an idea for the epilogue...we'll see! Thanks for reading!

• Written by hpboy13 on chapter #4. (June 7th 2008, 2am) Aaaaawwwwwwwwwwww!!! That has got to be one fo the sweetest things I've ever read! *sniffles* Did you say Prologue is next? Do you mena Epilogue? I dunno, I'm torn between desperately wanting to read more and not wanting to ruin the story (cuz this was an abslutely perfect ending!). Absolutely splendiferous job, and you certainly didn't disappoint concerning the 15th-bday followup! Now, I'm off to study for tomorrow's SAT IIs (if I flunk, it's on your conscience for writing such an un-put-down-able story!). P.S. Just wanted to point out, the "s" at the end of NEWTs isn't capitalized, it's just a plural, not part of the acronym (Nastily Exhausting Wizarding Tests) Author Response: Yes, I meant epilogue. I changed it! And good catch on the NEWTs thing. You are pretty sharp! Good luck on those SAT's...:) Thanks for reviewing!

• Written by vodkaholic on chapter #3. (June 5th 2008, 5pm) oooh 15 and has a love triangle going on! nice! as I was reading about Danny and Maggie, I thought about Lily and James.. right before you wrote that. hahaha! I really like this bit, it gave everyone a bit more personality.. and definitely shows how Teddy and Victoire might find themselves closer. Though I've never quite understood why men feel no qualms about dating, yet when they like a girl they've known their whole life.. they get upset when they finally date. lol. great job! can't wait for more! Author Response: I love Lily and James, so I thought I'd write a tiny homage to them by giving Danny and Maggie a similiar dynamic. And you're right, sometimes boys don't realize what's in front of them until someone else is interested! Teddy is figuring it out! Thanks for your detailed review!

• Written by vodkaholic on chapter #2. (June 5th 2008, 5pm) awwwe, being replaced as the little sister! poor Vic! Author Response: I know! No one likes being left behind! Thanks for reading!

• Written by vodkaholic on chapter #1. (June 5th 2008, 5pm) Awwwe that was sweet! I find the Victoire and Teddy relationship to be the most interesting. It's like almost like Lily and James, in a sense.. Just minus the love/hate portion! Author Response: I like writing V/T because there is a bit of flexibility there. There isn't too much in canon about them, so you can write them a little more freely.Thanks for your review!

• Written by hpboy13 on chapter #3. (June 5th 2008, 5pm) WOWZERS!!! DRAMA! OMG, I'm begging you not to just skip to her seventeenth bday now, or even her sixteenth, I have to find out what happens next in this super-twisted love triangle. Update soon!!! Author Response: Yes, this chapter was a bit long and dramatic! The next chaper is called "Seventeen" but there will be some backstory, so you won't miss out on anything!

• Written by hpboy13 on chapter #2. (June 5th 2008, 4pm) Well, it was a bit of a rough transition from the last chapter, but I still loved this one! I think you captured perfectly that awkward stage where one of the friends is just starting to get interested in the opposite sex, and what it means for the other friend. I'm really excited to see where this goes, cuz it's greta so far! Author Response: I was hoping to show how much things had changed for Victoire between 11 and 13, so the tone of this chapter is definitely different than the first. Thank you so much for your nice review!

• Written by hpboy13 on chapter #1. (June 5th 2008, 4pm) Aaawww, this was so cute! I think you captured Victoire and Teddy perfectly in this fic. I liked hwo you described them as opposites, because they're bound to be, when one's mother is Fleur and the other's is Tonks! Anyway, great job, and I'm off to read more! Author Response: I hadn't thought about the fact that their mothers were opposites in a lot of ways! :) Thanks for reading!

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #2. (June 5th 2008, 12pm) I've read many a fanfic and I'm very impressed with this one! The style and storyline have great potential. Keep it up! Author Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate it. More to come soon!

• Written by GlynnisGriffiths on chapter #2. (June 4th 2008, 10pm) Aw, your Victoire is an awfully good sport. You did a nice job of demonstrating the way that long friendships tend to morph (no pun intended) over the course of their duration, and at times (especially times of change, like 13 and 14) that shifting feels like a failing or ending. It's a relief to know that for Teddy and Victoire it isn't! :) I look forward to seeing how you tackle her later birthdays. With more peanut butter pancakes? Author Response: Thank you so much for your review! It's hard to keep friendships from changing (as much as Victoire wants to)and that is what I was trying to convey. Thanks for getting the point. 13 is a hard age! And yes, we have not seen the end of Victoire's favorite breakfast. :)

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #1. (June 2nd 2008, 11pm) Perfect. Just be careful of spelling&grammar! - lily_evans Author Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'll keep an eye out for commas and misplaced modifiers! :)