Reviews on "Tongue Tied" by queenspuppet

Written by blueberry on chapter #22.
(October 12th 2008, 10pm)LOL. thank you for making my day. this was hilarious. (:

Written by blueberry on chapter #19.
(October 12th 2008, 9pm)omG!

Written by blueberry on chapter #17.
(October 12th 2008, 9pm)lol. i like how you set this up. it wasn't cheesy or anything - it was what friends would do if they found soemthing out like that.
sometimes people loose charactors in things like this - but you didn't. (:
brilliant.
Written by blueberry on chapter #11.
(October 11th 2008, 8pm)awww! (:
i love the mulitple remus'. that was a nice touch.
Written by blueberry on chapter #9.
(October 11th 2008, 8pm)got to love Sirius. (:

Written by blueberry on chapter #8.
(October 11th 2008, 7pm)"Sirius gives me a winning smile, “Calliope DeSole, you’re my new project!”
People keep saying that." - that's my favorite line. it was really funny. (:

Written by blueberry on chapter #7.
(October 11th 2008, 7pm)ah! i love it!
you have a gift, darling. (:
Written by blueberry on chapter #4.
(October 11th 2008, 5am)AH! i can hardly keep my eyes open (i had a swim meet today and i'm exhasted) and it's not very late but i seriously can't see the words anymore. they're all a blur...
the only reason i'm telling you this is because your story is so amazing that if i wasn't so worn out i would keep reading this until it was finsihed and i'm really disappointed that i have to stop.
it's written wonderfull, realistically, and the plot line is beyond brilliant. i can see why this was nomiated for the hourglass. you didn't win? i can't figure out why...
i love your charctors - simple and right to the point. you don't doll them up or make excuses for why they are the way they are. you make them real and i feel as though i'm sitting there next to them. you really get me lost into this story that it's a shocker to realize that i'm sitting at the computer reading it.
all i can say is brilliant - and that doesn't even cover it. ha.
i really, really love it.
bb
btw - it's going on my favs list. there's no excuse for why it's not on there.
Written by blueberry on chapter #3.
(October 11th 2008, 4am)it's so simple... but not.
ah i love it! (:
Written by blueberry on chapter #2.
(October 11th 2008, 4am)there are so many lines in this that i love - and i think really make the story so brilliant. but, alas, there are way way way too many and it would take me forver.
"Anna's in a box" - that one hit home for me. i actaully thought about the same thing when my grandma died. i understood that.
anyway, i love it. it's brilliant.
Written by blueberry on chapter #1.
(October 11th 2008, 4am)i really, really love this way you wrote this and -if your whole story is like this, i'm not wuite sure what i'm going to do.
"love" doesn't quite cover it.it's one of those stories you just happen to come across and weren't expecting and then you can't look away until it's finished. it's 9:30 right now so your making me stay up. ;)
but really, this is really, really well done. i CANNOT wait for the next chapters to come - and you don't know how happy it makes me that it's done. lol. now i don't have to wait!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #24.
(June 23rd 2008, 8pm)I can't believe it's over! This is by far one of my very favorite stories, ever! It's so original and quirky and wonderful.. I can't wait to read more from you! You're an amazing writer!

Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #24.
(June 21st 2008, 2am)Beautiful.
I really really enjoyed reading this story. The way you wrote it made the characters completely interactive and the plot was fantastic.
I will definitely be reading more of you works.
Much Love,
Megan
Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #23.
(June 14th 2008, 8am)This chapter was a pretty sad, but I still loved it.
Only one more left? Aw, shucks...:(
Much Love,
MeganAuthor Response:
I know, I know. And look how long I've made you wait. I'll go post that last chapter now. Thanks dearie for all your lovely reviews.Maisy

Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #22.
(June 12th 2008, 8pm)Aw, awkward teenage sex.
How cute. :D
I liked this, it was really good and made me giggle. What good friends.
I can't wait for the final two chapters!
Much Love and Happy Writing,
MeganAuthor Response:
Hehehe. That was a funny chapter to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #22.
(June 11th 2008, 5pm)hahahahahahhahahahaha. This was absolutely wonderful! I love how you kept going back and forth between their points of view. The advice they were getting was HILARIOUS! Oh man, that was awesome. It brought tears to my eyes! I can't wait to read the rest! [;
Author Response:
Yay Thanks! It was a super fun chapter to write.

Written by Karen on chapter #21.
(June 9th 2008, 12am)Oh wow. I've just sat and read, read, read this whole story, =D.
AND, it was so good, I googled it so I could finish it, haha. And that was also good. I'm off to read, err, "Muse" is it? Aah well, I'm off to read it.
KAREN!
Author Response:
Haha That's so cool. I look forward to hearing more from you on HPFF. Thanks so much!

Written by colorfulwonder on chapter #21.
(June 7th 2008, 12am)i am in love.
with this story.
finish please.
love,
erikaAuthor Response:
Aw thanks. Yep. I'm about to post the last chapter. Thanks.

Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #21.
(June 6th 2008, 6pm)Aw, really? Only three more chapters?
*sighs*
I really do love this story and I cannot wait for the remaining chapters.
Author Response:
I know! Isn't it kind of sad? Alas. But thanks!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #21.
(June 6th 2008, 6pm)Ahhh this was so... perfect in a sloppy way! Remus and Calliope are absolutely perfect for eachother! I'm in love!
Author Response:
Hahaha. Yeah totally. Glad you enjoyed it.

Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #20.
(June 4th 2008, 5pm)Aw! So cute! ...well, not the infections, but the fact that Remus is just so...good to Calliope.
Good work!
Much Love,
MeganAuthor Response:
I like your chat room icon. Highlarious. You have great icons. Anyways! Thanks very much dear!Maisy
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #20.
(June 4th 2008, 4pm)Poor Calliope! God to be sick like that must be awfu! I'm glad Remus knows, though. And you could never drag this! You're really slightly rushing it because you know.. the end is coming too near!
Author Response:
Haha aw sorry. I'm glad you're enjoying it all though. Thanks for all the fantastic reviews.Maisy

Written by vodkaholic on chapter #19.
(June 4th 2008, 6am)I guess Calliope's secret will be found out soon enough. That was so romantic of Remus, though! I want a star... I love this so much! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author Response:
Most definitely, after all we were sort of getting on in the story really. Glad you like it!!

Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #19.
(June 4th 2008, 12am)I love that Remus really wants to take care of Calliope. *sighs*
I am in love with this story...
UPDATE SOON! Mmkay?
:D
Much Love,
MeganAuthor Response:
Hehe. Oh the cuteness. Glad you like it! Thanks for all the lovely reviews.Maisy
Written by t_w_a_drummer on chapter #19.
(June 3rd 2008, 5pm)argh! quick! need a next chapter now!
anyway....I'd just like to point out that ONCE MORE this fic is fan-dabby-dozy!!!!!! it's truly mega.
and. HE BOUGHT HER A STAR!!!!!! HE BOUGHT HER A STAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
adorabubble.
Author Response:
Haha,yes bit of a cliffhanger there. sorry about that. Wow. those are some amazing adjectives right there. well done you!Thanks!

Written by vodkaholic on chapter #18.
(June 2nd 2008, 4am)no! the end can't be near! I'm not ready for that! I like this one, it was quiky. I love it! You do such a great job with your characterizations!
Author Response:
You've still got about 6 chapters, but yes the end is fast approaching I'm afraid. Thanks for reading and reviewing and once I finish my next story I'll post it on this site again!Maisy

Written by oneslikeme on chapter #3.
(June 1st 2008, 9pm)aw how cute! i feel the beginning of something! :)
i have a feeling that maybe you are a quiet person yourself. you seem to know the dynamic of the talker/non-talker relationship quite well. lol
onward in my reading!
Author Response:
Haha. Actually I am usually the talker. I'm a relaxed person, but definitely very talkative. Keep enjoying and thanks for reviewing!

Written by oneslikeme on chapter #2.
(June 1st 2008, 8pm)i read over some of your replies to reviewers and i see that you think calliope is the driving force of the fic. i would very much have to agree with you. she's very well thought out and i feel like i can relate to her. i'm a quiet person myself, preferring not to say things that are unneccessary, if that makes sense. but sometimes it feels like people think i'm unintelligent.
anyway, i love the character. and she is not the only good thing about the fic either. everything is thought out and articulated very well. i love to write and sometimes i loose my drive, but every now and then, a fic comes along that renews my interest in writing. i think this fic has done that for me. thank you :)
Author Response:
Yeah I do see Calliope as part of the success of the story. I posted this on HPFF first and it was really popular there and from the reviews I got it definitely felt like she was the attraction in the story. And thank you so much! I'm glad that as a whole the story is succesfull and not just the main character. Thanks!

Written by oneslikeme on chapter #1.
(June 1st 2008, 8pm)aw, this looks like a good fic! i love remus and its hard to find a good story for him.
i love your descriptions of them all. and your writing shows a detailed thought process, which i love. great story so far! i will definately keep reading. :)
Author Response:
Yay. I'm glad you like it so far. And thanks for the compliments. Poor Remus definitely doesn't get the attention he deserves. It's very tragic.

Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #18.
(June 1st 2008, 3am)Lovely.
This is all very good and I cannot wait for the rest of the chapters!
Such a damn good story!
Much Love,
MeganAuthor Response:
Oh thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying it!
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