Reviews on "Seven" by shoelacy
Written by Anonymous on chapter #7.
(August 21st 2008, 2am)Aww I love Lily/James! I like how through little snippets you really showed them maturing and their feelings changing. I liked the chapter about the boys finding Remus in the infirmary, that was really sweet. Great job!
xx_Audrey
Written by Anonymous on chapter #7.
(July 27th 2008, 5am)lovely.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #7.
(July 10th 2008, 7pm)oh magnificent! this was a superb ending! oh I love it! I love Lily and James, and I think you do a terrific job capturing their essence! I hope to see more?
Author Response:
thanks for all your splendid reviews! :] i'm thinking about adding an epilogue (shhh! lol), but it'll probably be a long time coming. i'm glad you liked it so much! :]
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #6.
(July 10th 2008, 7pm)!!! this was absolutely splendid! Oh that's wonderful! I loveloveloved it!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #5.
(July 10th 2008, 7pm)awwwe ;[ Poor Lilykins! I think that very last line is especially powerful!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #4.
(July 10th 2008, 7pm)I like this one, the interaction between the two. It's short, but I think it captures the essence well. They all do [;
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #3.
(July 10th 2008, 6pm)I love reading pieces about Severus loving Lily. I wonder how differently everything would have turned out if Sev hadnt taken an interest into the Dark Arts. I love the way you describe Lily with such a free-ness, because a lot of people make her come off as a Hermione times three.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #2.
(July 10th 2008, 6pm)Haha, so I guess this is when they find out he's a werewolf. I love the last line! It fits so perfectly.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #1.
(July 10th 2008, 6pm);[ awe, poor Lily. I loved this bit, though. It's so.. innocent.
Written by blue_jeans on chapter #7.
(July 2nd 2008, 4pm)i love this. you did a brilliant job with this. it's just so... real feeling.
amazing. update soon! (hopefully there's more..)
bj
Written by abok1972 on chapter #7.
(July 2nd 2008, 3pm)I just read all seven chapters of this! It was so good, I love seeing the snippets of their lives and how they've changed. My only complaint is that it's too short! :)
Seriously, you could take any of these and turn it into something longer! Great job!Written by Anonymous on chapter #7.
(July 2nd 2008, 3pm)wow that was soo good!! i loved it, my favorite chapter was the one after DADA exams fifth year, where lily cant decide which one is worse, snape being bad or james being right. you did a lovely job!!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #6.
(March 7th 2008, 5am)i love this story so i have no idea why people don't review it. (:
really wonderful look on james. really brilliant.
19 hours!! omg! well i forgive you. lol. jkjk.
update when you can! really looking forward to your next one.
blue_jeans
Written by Tasoula on chapter #6.
(March 7th 2008, 4am)I really love how each of these chapters is short, but says exactly enough to get the point across: you can say in ten words what most people say in fifty and it's incredibly refreshing. And for each "canon" moment, you also use original ideas (I really liked number four), which makes this collection that much more interesting. They're all incredibly well-written and so interesting to read!
Author Response:
Thank you so much! I try to keep them concise while still getting the point across, and it's nice to see that I'm succeeding. :D
Written by dogstar on chapter #5.
(January 16th 2008, 1am)I like the fact that it's not a looooong drawn out story. sometimes when you cut a good moment, or well written moment, short; the magic lives on longer for the reader. keeps them thinking about it. :) i like your style.
Author Response:
Thanks! :)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(January 9th 2008, 10pm)oh... my... god. this is really really really good!! great job!! omg.. i'm in aw! you got everything out in not a lot of words! it's really hard to do that and get all the emotion you had.
blue_jeans
Written by Pattycake on chapter #2.
(December 26th 2007, 11pm)LOL@The last line. I love it!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 26th 2007, 7am)hey ur work's GREAT !!! please keep up the good work n update sooner. i love ur ficlets n i hope u make 'em better n better.
ur fan # 1,
Min.Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 25th 2007, 6pm)lol. i love this. it's prefect!! (:
amazing!
blue_jeansWritten by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(December 18th 2007, 2am)I love this story & especially this line...
Severus thinks that if Lily Evans could teach him how to laugh, everything would be just fine, indeed.
It just seemed to sum up Snape's character.
Great job! Keep it up!Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(December 17th 2007, 11pm)aw i love this one!! it's prefect and just awww!! (:
love it! update soon!
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(December 12th 2007, 2pm)
Merle on chapter #2.Aw. That last line was great because it added much more realism to the drabble.
Author Response:
Thanks a ton! :)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(December 7th 2007, 12pm)I'm interested in this, I have to say. I think you've captured little!Lily quite well, and how you've produced a small drabble about something that obviously had to happen at her at some point.
Lily's naivety comes off really well through this drabble, so good job with that!
Author Response:
Thanks! We always see Lily in her later school years as already exposed to the word, and I'd always wondered how it started. Thanks for your review! :)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(December 4th 2007, 11pm)this is good! i really like how you showed her first time being called a mudbloo=d out of all the things she could have seen in her first year. perfect! super! - as they say in france.
(: idk why i said that... lol. i just had french class... maybe that's why.
anyway, looking forward to your next update!
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