Reviews on "A Runaway, a Rat, a Wolf, and a Prat: Boys Driving me into Insanity" by Pheonix_Feather
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #6.
(July 17th 2008, 1am)hahahahahahaha I LOVED THIS! James and Lily are equally hilarious. I love the little running commentary and the way she asseses everything. The ending bit? Scandalous and definitely great. Can't wait for more!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #6.
(July 8th 2008, 6pm)i loved it. it's a great story. (:
update soon!!
blue_jeans
Written by mystery_spell on chapter #6.
(July 7th 2008, 4pm)Great chapter! Please update again soon!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #6.
(July 3rd 2008, 7pm)Dude, you're amazing! hahaha, i love Lily's descriptions of Cole. I hope you keep going with this:D
Written by shoelacy on chapter #4.
(July 3rd 2008, 4am)A couple things:
"I could still here Peter," Should be "hear.""but I preteneded to ignore," oops, typo! =P
"You were just to proud to give up," Should be "too."
Good job!
Written by shoelacy on chapter #2.
(July 3rd 2008, 3am)Minor deatil:
"trying to cell encyclopedia subscriptions" Should be "sell."Bloody brilliant line!:
"The girl doesn’t just need beauty sleep; she needs a bloody beauty coma."Good job. :]
Written by shoelacy on chapter #1.
(July 3rd 2008, 3am)Good first chapter! I noticed a couple of mistakes:
"to get the hell out of their." Should be "there."
and:
"You’re former best friend" Should be "your."Looking forward to reading more!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
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Written by grayx3eyesdsoul on chapter #2.
(April 22nd 2008, 8pm)XD
I love it!Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(March 27th 2008, 1am)This was great. You should definitely keep continuing. It takes a different turn on Lily and James. Keep up the good work.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(March 26th 2008, 1pm)updateeeeeeeeeeee.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(March 26th 2008, 5am)aww thats no fun! i was hoping for more.. but you know.. it's not so bad! i like fillers, background is always nice. can't wait for the next!
_vodkaholic
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(March 24th 2008, 10pm)i was a little confused at parts but overall it was really good. (:
A+++++! keep it up!!
blue_jeans
Written by mystery_spell on chapter #4.
(January 3rd 2008, 10pm)I changed this because it was choppy: "Brenna caught my eye and grinned as Alice yammered on. Alice had dated Frank for eternity and all other boys liked Brenna, who was probably as likely to commit as Sirius was. She teased and flirted and completely confused anyone who ever liked her. Hell, she confused some so much that they gave up on girls altogether."
You used the wrong word, I changed it: "I could still hear Peter trying to make conversation with Brenna and Alice."
"Forbidden fruit? I am not a bloody kiwi." You are absolutely fantastic.
You said that you weren't particularly fond of this chapter, but it's very good! I eagerly await more!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 29th 2007, 10am)awwe poor prongsie! lily is nutters. this chapter was amazing! i can't wait for the next!!!! really! hurry? please?
xo; j
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(December 29th 2007, 9am)LMAO! 'seriously? who lights themselves on fire?' BRILLIANT!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #2.
(December 29th 2007, 9am)lmao the words and way you write in this chapter are bloody brilliant!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(December 28th 2007, 10am)Hey, GREAT fic! i toTALLLLY love it ! But plsssss update faster n faster ! Cuz im literally waitin here fr SOOOO long! so ummmm pleasE do update faster..............
ur FABulous FAn # 1
Min.Written by mystery_spell on chapter #3.
(December 11th 2007, 10pm)Fantastic! You are absolutely brilliant!
Written by soppie on chapter #2.
(November 27th 2007, 12pm)Wahaha! I loved this! It´s so funny and lovely written.
Voldemort not being hugged enough! Hilarious! Keep writing!
Written by blue_jeans on chapter #2.
(November 26th 2007, 11pm)ha ha ha hahahaha.... i can't WAIT for the next chapter to see how this turns out!! lol.
great job! i really like this one!!
update soon!Written by mystery_spell on chapter #2.
(November 26th 2007, 11pm)Love your fic! Not only is it hilarious, but I can relate to the way it's written! Fantastic work, I'll be back for more whenever you've update this! :D
Written by blue_jeans on chapter #1.
(November 26th 2007, 12am)i like this. it's really funny! (: great job!
i kind of got lost a little at the end though. (:
update soon!
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