Reviews on "Journal of a Mister Cool" by soppie

• Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #4. (May 19th 2008, 1am) tee hee. I love this! I can imagine little Sirius trying to make himself cool. I think that it is clever and well written. I'll be looking forward to more updates soon! Happy Writing, Megan Author Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon, but I'm also writing on something else, so it might take a while.

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #4. (May 16th 2008, 7am) I LOVE this! You have 11 year old Sirius' voice down perfectly...you can see he's a prat but he's just so charming and funny and desperate to be cool and different you love him anyway. That's young Sirius to me! Love the dog references too. :) Excellent stuff! Author Response: Thank you! That's exactly how I tried to portray him, I'm glad it worked out!

• Written by lilyconrad on chapter #2. (December 5th 2007, 9pm) Terribly cute! I love the writing style. I think is rather realistic of what a twelve year old Sirius would write. I also enjoyed the Gossip Girl reference in the sorting:) Oh and I agree, I don't think this is a copy of the fic about James' diary. There are lots of fanfictions centering around journals (like Beedaily's 'Commentarius' for example which happens to be one my all time faves) So overall, good job!

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #3. (November 19th 2007, 12am) lol cute! can't wait for the next! and thanks, happy turkey day too you, too! even though it seems you dont'celebrate it

• Written by wickedly_lily on chapter #1. (November 10th 2007, 5am) awesome fanfic! i simply love mister cool sirius! thanks for the review btw! love the "flying carpet" and the "pureblood magazine"! cant wait for the next chapter!

• Written by vodkaholic on chapter #2. (October 26th 2007, 12am) I LOVE THIS. I just wanted to say that. I love reading things from a different point of view and it's cute to look at things through a young, happy Sirius' eyes! I've read the other one done by James and I don't think yours is the same at all! Yours is definitely written in a different fashion and unique in it's own way! I love how you portray Sirius, though! It's almost just how I pictured him, he's like an ADD kid who is overly excited about everything and always prepared to cause mischief!

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #2. (October 25th 2007, 10pm) hahahah this is a cute idea! it's funny to think of sirius as being a little kid. i loved the first two chapters! can't wait to read more!

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #1. (October 16th 2007, 3pm) Yeuh!!! Lmao!! Thats CLASSIC!! I already reviewed this chapter, but seriously I liked it so much I want to review again. AND YEAYY, YOU USED -BOLD- FOR THE DATES AND STUFF!! This is hilariously funny, and unlike the reviewer below me, I dont think you copied newyorkcitycop's "Not-So-Secret and Completely Manly Diary of James Potter". I adore that fic as well, but I can see many differences between them. James's for instance, he adds entries every minute or so, while your Sirius adds entries daily, or sometimes later than that. James cusses almost every sentence, while Sirius is too young to know a lot of words. Theyre demeanors are different and Sirius is MUCH more immature namely because he hasnt even started Hogwarts yet, while James is in his 5th/6th year at Hogwarts. There are so many different things, honestly I cant see any similarities. The writing styles are different and you both have different senses of humor (although both wonderful) and while James is telling what he did at the PRESENT, Sirius is telling what happened that DAY, as in, in the PAST. Anywho, I just wanted to make that clear because I dont think its a copy, but completely your own idea. And I adore BOTH FICS!! I hope you update soon, I've actually been waiting for this and thought you might have been disheartened by that reviewers comment or something. I LOVE this story, I LOVE how you portray Sirius, and I would LOVE it if you updated soon! ;) Empyrean. =D!!!

• Written by empyrean on chapter #1. (October 2nd 2007, 10pm) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Omg!! This was hilarious!! I love you!! Gosh, where do I start?? Okii, first of all, thank you SO much for writing this. SIRIUS'S DIARY!! AAH! Love him! And James!!! I love how you make him immature and funny because he's only 12 years old, obviously, he wont know huge vocabulary words and such. He still doesnt know a lot of things about the outside world (such as if Muggles are evil or not, lmao, the Ted Tonks thing was hilarious). I love his sarcasm, and his wit, and his amazing optimistic-ness (that isnt a word but whatever) for living in a house with such Dark, evil ppl and he hates it. Hes wonderful. Him trying to be cool was sooooo funny. I like how you made this go with the facts we have in the books. For instance, how he hates his family and doesnt like Dark Arts, how hes 'bored' and 'laidback', etc, and how he loves Andy, and also the NAMES of his family are correct. I recognised the Uncle Cygnus and Aunt Druella from a family tree I saw somewhere, so obviously your facts are good. You've done your research, woot! Not many authors do that, they just make it up along the way. There werent any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors from what I could read, it was WONDERFULLY and HILARIOUSLY written, and I'm so excited and interested to see where this is going. There was ONE tiny thing you could fix though...For the dates, like August 30th 1972 blah blah, you could make it in BOLD font because it makes it clearer to see and we dont get it mixed up with the entries. Is there going to be James in the later chapters? I LOVE JAMES! *squeal* Him and Sirius are my favorite characters. Again, thank you for writing this! I'll be reading and looking for this! Please update soon! Empyrean. =D

• Written by Anonymous on chapter #1. (October 2nd 2007, 8pm) So this fic is OK, but it is a major (and I mean MAJOR major) copy of newyorkcitycop's "Not-So-Secret and Completely Manly Diary of James Potter". I absolutely ADORE that fic, and I think that you have tried to imitate it. Although your writing itself is quite good, I can't escape the fact that it's just a complete copy. Maybe you should try writing something which is solely your own work? I'm sorry to be harsh, but I just feel bad for NYCcop (whoever she/he may actually be) that you have copied his/her idea.