Reviews on "Totally Hawt Potter Love" by
ghostofbambi
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(May 19th 2008, 8pm)hahhahahahahahahahaha. have i mentioned how much i love this story!? you are amazing!
_vodkaholic

Written by blue_jeans on chapter #5.
(May 16th 2008, 11pm)lol.
you get two thumbs up.
this is hilarious.
blue_jeans
Written by LoonyLuna on chapter #5.
(May 16th 2008, 10pm)So, I'm currently rolling around on the ground from laughter. Hard. In the face!
This is really funny and simply fantastic.
Add more soon!!! Plzthx.
Happy writing,
Megan
Written by blue_jeans on chapter #3.
(December 13th 2007, 12am)heureux juste de me voir - this i think should be de voir moi.... unless you speak more french then me and i'm wrong. (:
Written by Anonymous on chapter #4.
(October 26th 2007, 5pm)This is absolutely hi-fucking-larious.
Best parody fic ever, following Oy!Angie's Snogwarts.
Please keep writing. (I would miss all the laughter and the STDs if you stopped)
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #4.
(October 25th 2007, 11pm)hahahahhhaahahahahaha this is awesome!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(October 9th 2007, 6am)I can't believe you'd be so mean as to totally copy my fic and make it funnier still! It's like, totally unfair that you get 763% more reviews than I do. Liek, wtf?
Kidding, you have me literally laughing out of my mind. I think Remus, Serious, STUPIDBITCH and GOSHAGYOURSELFSLUT should totally have an orgy in the next chapter! Keep the love coming!

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(October 5th 2007, 3am)
Musetta on chapter #3.Oh my gosh. I am laughing so hard right now, you have no idea. :DD
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(September 14th 2007, 6pm)Dood, I read this on fanfiction.net, and I have to say, AM STILL LOVIN IT!!
I prolly wont continue to read it on ff.net if you continue it here, becus, face it, THIS SITE IS SO MUCH BETTER!
So yes, please please continue, becus we all know that I'll go barking mad if you dont, and THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL PEICE OF WORK!
*wipes tear* I am...so proud of you!
~Baby Green Eyes
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(May 23rd 2007, 1am)DUDE. You've pulled off the parody very well! It doesn't feel contrived at all. A lot of the time I read a "parody" and I think someone should parody the "parody" just because the "parody" is basically a string of cliche after cliche. I like how you've actually given this one a story and a direction -that it could work as a Serious-ish Story- but you've incorporated your Pet peeves into the storyline. heh. (If someone wrote a parody of a parody I would nominate you to write it!)
Good stuff! Waiting for the rest! (bahahah loved the line bout Lily using her Blackberry for James' msn n mobile number! LOL)
Written by Serena on chapter #2.
(May 22nd 2007, 5pm)omgz it totally cut off my last review.
you have to update soon kayzz??? lol
liek, i'm siriusly in love with this fic lol
Honestly, though. good job. This is a great parody. Sometimes I get the feeling that parodies are sort of forced, but this is a really good one! Keep up the good work.
Serena

Written by Serena on chapter #3.
(May 22nd 2007, 5pm)Why are Sirius and Remus calling each other "vous"? That's very formal French you're using. The subject pronoun "nous" is hardly ever used in conversational French and they hardly ever say "pouvons-nous" even for a question. It would be "Nous pouvons ..." or better "On peut ..."
Sorry. Sorry. I am nitpicky about French because I'm super-proud of being about the only American in the world who speaks it. French mistakes or oddities just stick out at me ... I don't really care.
OMG! this is SUCH a good story. like i'm in looooove with sirius and everything. like, can you make me a character and hook me up with him or soething lol???????
i really like teh sex because its so realistic. like, that's treu looooooooove you know?
Author Response:
Well I can't speak French, and I'm not American, so I wouldn't really know about Americans who can speak French. I basically got all of those from a very rude phrase book. I think the fact that it's formal French makes it even better, really.But yeah, thank you so much for the review! It's really nice of you to take the time to do that! Love!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(May 21st 2007, 6pm)Omg, this made me laugh so hard that i nearly peed! keep up the good work, this is awesome!!!!!!!!

Written by loveloss on chapter #3.
(May 21st 2007, 1am)Gah! You win at life. Honestly, this is the funniest parody I've read in a while. Not to mention it was chock full of iconable quotes. ("Who he wanted to fuck. Hard. In the face!"). And the anagrams of Lily's friends' names were positively genius. The only sad and slightly frightening thing is that I have read so many fics that had one or more elements of this plot where the author was 100 per cent serious. God, I fear for the future of humanity. Anyway, phenomenal job. I can't wait to read more. :)
Author Response:
Hehehe, I've put about five 'Hard. In the face!' lines in my next chapter, in the places where they make the least sense. Eg: "Lily started to panic. Hard. In the face!" I like that line. Thank you so, so much for your lovely reviews, you have no idea how happy it makes me to read them. I've almost finished the nest two chapters, so they'll be up soon, probably within a couple days.

Written by loveloss on chapter #1.
(May 21st 2007, 12am)I obviously have not finished reading, but I just had to say this: helium filled ballons! Ha! I pretty much love you right now.
Author Response:
I love you for loving me for writing this!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #3.
(May 20th 2007, 11pm)LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!! i totally love this parody. it is so TRUE! lol. can't wait for more.Author Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it. Chapters four and five are coming soon.

Written by Squeak4ever on chapter #3.
(May 20th 2007, 9pm)Haha. I love this - your worst fics rolled into one but in a grammatically correct way! Please update soon.
Author Response:
Not my worst fics! I wouldn't write this seriously, but yeah, the worst fics I've found. I shall update soon, chapters four and five are very nearly done!

Written by infinitelyrare on chapter #3.
(May 20th 2007, 8pm)Ah, I love this, especially bits like the "MASK OF ANGST!(â„¢)"! I always love when writers can approach something both seriously and humorously through a parody... brilliant job! =)
Author Response:
The MASK OF ANGST!(™) is definitely trademarked to me now. I really hate those bad fics so much, and I think I just got to the point where I felt like parsonally attacking the author's (I know most people call them Suethors, but I coined the phrase Planks and now quite a few of my LJ friends use it), and as I couldn't do that, I attacked them with words. Voila! Thank you so much for your review!
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