Reviews on "She Does As She's Told" by Madame_Meow
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 28th 2006, 9pm)Er...
That's a lovely tie you're wearing.There's quite a bit of roomfor improvement. I, personally, just think the plot doesn't fit very well...
Sorry.
Author Response:
No, it's ok, I like constructive critisism as long as it's not too mean. What do you mean the plot doesn't fit well? Like what doesn't it fit with, I mean? And is there anything else I can improve on other than the plot? (E.g. Spelling, grammar, etc.)
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(September 25th 2006, 12am)very powerful.
depressing, yes, but you definitely evoked emotion.
well doneWritten by Ginny8799 on chapter #1.
(September 22nd 2006, 9pm)This story is very interesting. Please update
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