Reviews on "Harry Potter and the Third Party" by Highice007
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #30.
(August 24th 2008, 7pm)oh no, what does Marietta plan on doing?!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #29.
(August 24th 2008, 7pm)I'm so glad you finally let us in on what happened! I can't believe that Harry didn't believe Cho's assessment. Great job, though! I really like it! And it wasn't too long, it was perfect!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #28.
(August 24th 2008, 7pm)You're probably still not updating from your computer, but as always you have a lot of grammar, punctuation and speling errors. I think you make Cho a little too weepy, but I realize you made her that way for a reason. It's so frustrating that she thinks Harry is with Hermione! Lol and I think you make Harry a little too dismissive, he usually takes everyone's ideas into serious consideration.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #27.
(July 31st 2008, 6pm)Poor Seamus ;[ I hope they figure that room out soon!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #26.
(July 29th 2008, 4am)wow, that's crazy! poor Seamus... I wonder what happened! It's really interesting to see Ron being the smart one who's noticing things and looking out for Harry, nice change of scenery!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #25.
(July 28th 2008, 4pm)That's insane! Poor Harry! And even his head of house doesn't believe him! I'm surprised he hasn't talked to Hermione and that she hasn't figured it out yet!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #24.
(July 25th 2008, 11pm)Wow, this is getting crazier and crazier!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #23.
(July 25th 2008, 8pm)Marietta is insane!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #7.
(July 25th 2008, 2pm)this is good create more or my wand shall punish u! lol..... Melkor the Dark
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #22.
(July 23rd 2008, 5am)ooh, whats he gonna show them?!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #21.
(July 23rd 2008, 12am)ron and hermione are funny. you've been forgetting your second set of quotations in a variety of places, just to let you know. and you should double check your spelling and the words you're using, you mix a lot of them up with other words that sound the same, so they've been used in the wrong form. update soon!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #20.
(July 22nd 2008, 9pm)Marietta is insane! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #19.
(July 17th 2008, 12am)Interesting concept. And if you go to your MemCP and click on stats, it'll show you your reviews and the hits you have received. I'm excited to see what happens next! I wonder if they'll catch Marietta in the act? And if Marietta will succeed in Harry's downfall?
Written by Anonymous on chapter #18.
(July 15th 2008, 6pm)This was interesting, I'm glad to see some of the pieces of the puzzle are coming together. This is exciting! Can't wait to see what happens next! And again, you might want to spellcheck and make sure you're using the right words!
_vodkaholic
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #17.
(July 13th 2008, 8am)Just a bit of advice, you might want to spellcheck before you post, I've noticed quite a few spelling errors, like nuisances and etc. Also using the wrong spelling of words, like walking by. And thanks for the info. [; I wonder what Harry will say to Cho!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #16.
(July 12th 2008, 8pm)wow, interesting twist. why do they so for the greater good of society, rather than for their Lord?
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #15.
(July 12th 2008, 7pm)Wow, Marietta is nuts. I wonder where she learned such advanced stuff. And thanks for the notes at the top, that helped me out a lot. And thanks, I agree.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #14.
(July 10th 2008, 6pm)Marietta is a serious wack job! lol I still can't believe that Cho thinks Hermione is Harry's girlfriend. Lol.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #13.
(July 10th 2008, 6pm)haha, you're welcome [; and yes, I am Russian. Why do you ask? I bet you it was Marietta with Filch! And that Filch's 'twin' is someone using polyjuice potion!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #12.
(July 10th 2008, 6pm)Fiona?! Doesn't she hate his guts? this is so weird... will Harry ever find out what Marietta did to him?
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #11.
(July 9th 2008, 7pm)Weird, so did Marietta enhance his anger or something?
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #10.
(July 9th 2008, 7pm)That's really weird! I wonder what Marietta did to him!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #9.
(July 9th 2008, 7pm)Cho's a bit overdramatic. If she actually opened her eyes, she'd know Hermione id DEFINITELY not Harry's girlfriend! She's such a girl ;P
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #8.
(July 9th 2008, 7pm)Wow, Harry has some super resentment toward Dumbledore! I'm definitely likin' this so far! I like how you're building on the fact that he his indeed a teenager who is conflicted by many emotions. And an ego!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #7.
(July 9th 2008, 6am)So is this going to fluctuate between Cho and Harry? I don't mind.. Like I said, it's nice to see someone elses perspective, too. [;
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #6.
(July 9th 2008, 6am)Poor Cho, that's really depressing.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #5.
(July 9th 2008, 6am)You definitely give a different perspective of Cho and it's refreshing, because everyone seems to forget about her.
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #4.
(July 9th 2008, 6am)This is very interesting. I'm definitely interested in seeing how this goes, compared to the actual book. you definitely show a darker side of Harry!
Written by vodkaholic on chapter #3.
(July 9th 2008, 6am)You do a great job of describing Harry's emotion. I'd be peeved as all hell, too! I like this! It's great!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #2.
(July 1st 2008, 5pm)I love how everyone always seems so surprised that Harry's relatives never see him off! Lol. This was a little short, but definitely keeps one wondering what will happen next! Great job!
_vodkaholic
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