Reviews on "Light" by 
AmeliaBedelia
Written by Anonymous on chapter #1.
(April 5th 2008, 10am)err... shouldn't you say straight O student?
Written by Lyra on chapter #24.
(September 19th 2007, 8pm)oooooooh
so cute :)
it was a great story.. congratulations ;)
Written by Lyra on chapter #18.
(September 19th 2007, 6pm)oh my, i've been reading the story since yesterday. these last chapters were sooo cute. and i LOVED the way bella told the boys about 'lily's secret'. :D she's really smart. hahaha.
Written by Anonymous on chapter #5.
(September 18th 2007, 6am)I'm so confused:
He tried to confront Remus once during Herbology but he just put on an airy voice. "It's nothing," he responded. "Nothing at all…" Obviously James didn't believe Remus but since he kept getting "nothing" as an answer he finally gave up.
Is it still winter break, or is this a flashback? Also, why didn't James or especially Lily write to Dumbeldore????
Written by Anonymous on chapter #24.
(October 20th 2006, 12am)You are fantastic. Congratulations on writing a wonderful story. Great job.
Jamie
Written by Anonymous on chapter #24.
(October 16th 2006, 6am)No Offence but this last chapter doesn't make sense. You said that Remus gave Breanna a SILVER BRACELET, but he's a werewolf and he wouldn't be able to touch it with out burning himself. Great story though
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(October 15th 2006, 10pm)
PotterChick958 on chapter #24.Lovely. Truly lovely. I'm so glad that everyone got back to Hogwarts safely. Except for Peter. Because he is a backstabbing arseface. But anyways. The 2 dates were incredibly sweet. Sirius had better do something that sweet for Bella soon! It's nice to see that everyone is getting their happily ever after. Cannot wait to read the new story!
Love, Amanda
Written by Anonymous on chapter #23.
(October 8th 2006, 1am)Fanastic job!
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(October 7th 2006, 11pm)PotterChick958 on chapter #23.Uh oh...
Watch. Lily proally has a portkey in her pocket, because she is amazingly prepared for everything. But HOLY MOTHER OF MERLIN THIS IS INTENSE.
Love, Amanda
Written by Bubblepants on chapter #23.
(October 5th 2006, 12pm)Woohoo I got to read two chapters in one! They were fantastic, you have me totally hooked - I can't believe theres only one chapter left! And that was a mean cliffhanger too! I'm going to explode with supsense waiting for the next bit!
Mel xx
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(October 1st 2006, 7am)PotterChick958 on chapter #22.Woah. Breanna can See? Intense...really intense.
Great fight scene btw. But only 2 more chapters?!?!? *sigh*
Love, Amanda
Written by Bubblepants on chapter #21.
(September 27th 2006, 8pm)Omg, I'm so sorry - I've only just realised that I've been reading this without reviewing for ages! *Begs forgiveness* hehe!
Anyway this chapter was amazing! It had me totally hooked - I had to abandon my lecture notes to finish reading it! I loved that Lily was disguised as a death eater - I was getting angry at her in the last chapter! And the kiss... awww and yay is all that can be said!
Can't wait for the next chapter and I promise I'll review!!
Mel xx
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(September 27th 2006, 4am)PotterChick958 on chapter #21.YAY LILY YOU WILL SAVE THE DAY! My faith has been completely restored in Lily. *sigh*
But who DOES Voldemort want then?
This is getting really intense.
Love, Amanda
Written by loonymoony8 on chapter #21.
(September 27th 2006, 1am)Wow! Very nice! Awesome job writing this. It's so intense. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more.
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(September 23rd 2006, 7pm)PotterChick958 on chapter #20.Woah. James is there already. And Lily decided not to go with the group following James? What is wrong with her!?!?!? She had better be jumping on her broom at the last second or so, because she just cannot leave James to DIE!
Love, Amanda
Written by Anonymous on chapter #19.
(September 22nd 2006, 4pm)Hi, im like new to this story, and i think James and Sirius are adorable, and Breanna and Bella are great, but Lily's a fucking bitch. Lily is NOT this way, man! She's not a slutty whore who breaks ppl hearts!!
Written by loonymoony8 on chapter #19.
(September 21st 2006, 2am)Yes, very good! I definitely enjoyed it. Wow. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the awesome work!
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(September 20th 2006, 11pm)PotterChick958 on chapter #19.You know, I think I shall be smacking Lily right about...now. Leaving James at a time like this, when he finally confessed his LOVE?!? GAH LILY YOU IDIOT.
I think Sirius should teach the girls to become Animagi.
And Peter being a Death Eater already? Hot damn.
Love, Amanda
Written by Anonymous on chapter #18.
(September 19th 2006, 5am)Ooh, I really liked this update. Great job! UPDATE SOON. Bye.
Written by sliverofsilver on chapter #1.
(September 18th 2006, 6pm)Hey. I'm about to read this story and I'll leave an actual review after I do. However, before I start I'd like suggest you take a look at your summary. The "...or did it?" is incorrect because the rest of it is in present tense. It should say, "or does it?" Besides that one mistake, it's a very intriguing summary!
Author Response:
I changed it!Hope you like the story when you start reading it! :DYours truly,Amelia Bedelia
Written by Anonymous on chapter #18.
(September 18th 2006, 12pm)Oh no oh no oh no oh no OH NO!
Why in the name of HEAVEN does Lily have to be so GODDAMN STUPID?!
"I wont settle as a trophy girl!"
Pffft! Ok, If she TRULY likes James, and Truly knows him, then wouldnt she KNOW that he doesnt use them? WTF, he didnt even KISS any of his past girlfriends..I swear Lily can be SO daft sometimes! Wait, scratch that, IS ALWAYS DAFT! I dont think the real Lily is this flirty and slutty and stupid..I could write a whole book on all the stupid things she does...I mean, HONESTLY!
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(September 18th 2006, 8am)PotterChick958 on chapter #18.heh. Dumbledore knows what these young kids do at night! ahahahhaha
As for the Animagi...no Anesthesia. I saw that episode of Grey's Anatomy tonight, and that scene reminded me of it. And then Lily and James's relationship, YAY TO LILY FOR FINALLY ADMITTING IT! WOOOOOO!
I'm glad James didn't lose his memory. That would have been so hard on everybody.
Love, Amanda
Written by loonymoony8 on chapter #16.
(September 13th 2006, 11pm)Definitely enjoyed it, it's very good! Oh, but James doesn't know who Lily is. *gasp* Oh man. Hey, but maybe Lily can spend more time with him and help him to remember? Just spending time with each other can bring them closer. ^_^ Yay!
I hope you update again soon. I can't wait to read more!
Written by Anonymous on chapter #16.
(September 13th 2006, 3am)*GASP* OH MY GOD YOU DID NOT JUST END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT! OH MAN. You HAVE to update, STAT. I'm serious, this is KILLING me! :P
Alright, you are a fabulous storyteller and I have a huge smile on my face everytime I see that you've updated and holy shit you better update soon because this is really killing me. No lie. Haha. Great job with this story! :D
Written by Anonymous on chapter #15.
(September 13th 2006, 3am)When Lily is talking about carpeting the floors and fireplaces for the rooms you say 'worrying one bit about THEY weather' Just wanted to point that tiny mistake out for you.
~Jamie
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(September 13th 2006, 1am)PotterChick958 on chapter #16.Woah. Seriously? James has amnesia? Duuuuude. This is bad. But you know, it could be quite interesting for Lily to have to teach James everything all over again. Bring them together.
Charles = poopy head. I really don't like people named Charles in general. I knew he was bad news. Because Lily is only for James. They are perfection.
But I did like this chapter too. And I cannot wait to read the rest!
Love, Amanda
Written by Anonymous on chapter #15.
(September 11th 2006, 12pm)Hi, Okay, I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE this story, but the only thing I really really really REALLY HATE about it is that Lily is constantly BREAKING JAMES'S HEART! :(
First Amos Diggory, then this Charles guy, who's next?! Why cant she take a hint that James is in love with her or something? She's so retarded! GAH! Thats the only thing that pisses me off: Lily and her small peanut-sized brain!
Written by loonymoony8 on chapter #15.
(September 10th 2006, 10pm)Oh my God! So they didn't die? They'll all be happy then for Breanna. Yay! Nice job writing this chapter! I noticed you have a couple typos in this chapter, but not any major though. I can't wait to read more! Please update as soon as you can.
Written by loonymoony8 on chapter #14.
(September 9th 2006, 11pm)Awesome chapter! Or should I say chapters? I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile, you know, with school and all and then sometimes I couldn't get a chance to go online. Sorry again! But I'd like to say that you do a wonderful job writing this as always. It's really great. Fantastic! Just keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more. I'm dying to find out what the prank really is exactly.
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(September 9th 2006, 7pm)PotterChick958 on chapter #14.James finally admitted that he loves Lily out loud! YAY!
I thought it was cute how they spent the night together on the couch. Must have been very comfortable...mmh.
As for the prank, cannot wait to see what happens with it!
Love, Amanda
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